Brain Twister
Graphics -- Under renovation with the header still in surgery? The new layout could turn out better than the old one.
Content -- Profiles/comments on the entertainment scene, some reprints, etcetera rants on student life. Too early to tell what else could happen since there's only four pages.
The English seems literally translated from Tagalog and comes off awkward.
Recommend -- Get an editor. Some good mags, newspapers and bestseller books added to your reading list will give you a handle on idiom. Pidgin will put you at the bottom of the ladder when you go jobhunting.
Rating -- 4.0
Labels: idiom
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