Friday, July 27, 2007

Review: http://fattybearyus.blogspot.com/




Graphics -- The white on black notebook design spells style. Text and images are packed close but the empty black spaces at the sides somehow lessen the clutter effect. I'm always a sucker for cartoons and animal pics, they lighten up the heaviest/dumpiest place.

Content -- Random rambling that thankfully doesn't focus too much on school doings, which would shut out the visitor. The material is more viewer-aware than that in most student sites. Fave food, jokes, skincare tips, heroines, song lyrics and peeves. Nothing much to move comeback traffic, however.

Recommend -- More controversy, drama, intrigue, tension, hair and blood-pressure raising like the cofibean and Atienza items. Adrenalin shots to make them sit up and comment. A little nitpicking here: reduce font size for post dates, make headline font bigger.

Also, your header's kid stuff, shop around for something more your age. And next time, design vacation footage around sights and sounds -- firing squad shots are a no-no!

Rating -- 7.5

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2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow I've really been featured. Thanks for the review. Wheeeww. Now I know how Carrie Bradshaw felt while waiting for the review of her book.

July 28, 2007 at 11:49 PM  
Blogger beratemyblog said...

hope you got something out of it.

July 29, 2007 at 1:36 PM  

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